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A significantly better classification performance was demonstrated by the proposed method, and the improvement was found to be considerable.

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The proposed method classified 8.4 percentage points more lesions correctly than the ResNet-50 baseline (94.1% versus 85.7% accuracy; p = 0.003).

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Previous studies have examined this question in a variety of settings, and the literature remains divided. Data were collected over an 18-month period using the protocol described in Section 2. Response rates were higher in the treatment group than in the control group at all three sites. Further work will be needed to establish the underlying mechanism, and several authors have called for larger samples.

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Response rates were higher in the treatment group than in the control group at all three sites. Data were collected over 18 months under the protocol described in Section 2. Earlier studies in other settings have reached divided conclusions, and larger samples will be needed to establish the underlying mechanism.