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“We are pleased to submit our manuscript entitled ‘Sleep duration and cognitive decline in older adults’ for consideration in your esteemed journal. This paper reports the results of an important study in our field, and we believe it will be of great interest to your readers. The manuscript has not been published elsewhere and all authors have approved the submission.”

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“We submit ‘Sleep duration and cognitive decline in older adults’ for consideration as an Original Article. Earlier work has linked short sleep duration to cognitive decline largely in cross-sectional samples; we followed the same measure prospectively in a community-dwelling cohort and found that the association attenuates once baseline cognitive status is accounted for. Because the journal has recently published on measurement error in community cognitive studies, we believe the finding speaks to a question your readership is already engaged with.”

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“Our findings have significant implications for public health policy and will contribute greatly to the field.”

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“Our findings suggest that risk estimates derived from cross-sectional samples may overstate the contribution of short sleep in this population, which is directly relevant to how screening intervals for community cognitive assessment are set.”